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Self-Mutilation by ~NikiXXX:iconNikiXXX:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed


Sitting on the bathroom floor
A razor blade drags across her skin
Tracing the movement throuhg her veins
Forgive her father for she loves this sin

She never cuts to kill herself
Instead to ease her pain
Blood raises to the surface
And drips down like rain

No tear falls from her eye
But with a few more strokes of the blade
She becomes light-headed
And the room begins to fade

Consciousness has left her
While death whispers in her ear
She can't listen, her voice
Screaming is all she can hear

No longer praying for forgiveness
Her life is now first on her list
Looking down, I secretly
Cherish the scars upon my wrist
©2005-2009 ~NikiXXX
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Author's Comments

Anyone who has read some of the poems/stories wrote about me knows that I have suffered with cutting. I'm glad to say I haven't cut in over 7 months. This is a poem that I wrote while I was cutting that explained how I was feeling at the time.

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=TrinityXXX Mar 7, 2005, 8:55:47 AM
wow, niki that was really good. I mean really good. I seriously was feeling ill while reading it.
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~Uchanati Mar 7, 2005, 10:07:32 AM
you translate well the emotion and action into words, very good stuff. Must run in the family ;)

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My bite might not kill but it sure fucking hurts!
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~CthulhuTheory Mar 7, 2005, 12:39:18 PM
excellent peice. very. excelllent.

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Drove through ghosts to get here.
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~NikiXXX Mar 7, 2005, 8:16:29 PM
thanx for checking it out. I never considered myself to be any form of poet but I'm glad you guys liked it :blackrose:
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~inpayne Mar 9, 2005, 3:21:51 PM
Very nice, I like the emotiong I feel from it:)

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"Love is beautiful, it keeps you alive. It takes your heart and soul to new heights, you did not know were their." -me
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~SkiZycSweeTie Mar 10, 2005, 10:44:24 AM
Very emotional, nicely done!
:clap: :clap:

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:blackrose: :pointr: ~whatever doesnt kill you makes you stronger~ :pointl: :blackrose:
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~NikiXXX Mar 10, 2005, 6:56:46 PM
thank you very much :blackrose:
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~inpayne Mar 10, 2005, 7:11:49 PM
You're welcome:)

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"Love is beautiful, it keeps you alive. It takes your heart and soul to new heights, you did not know were their." -me
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